What Happened?

April 6, 2011
By Alibear BRONZE, Oakville, Other
Alibear BRONZE, Oakville, Other
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't have to suffer to be a poet. Adolescence is enough suffering for anyone.


What happened

to the happy go lucky girl

that used to fill

this sad, empty girl

She used to dance and sing

She used to spend hours with friends

She used to smile

Now she sits in her room alone

Now she sits there crying tears of pain

Now she wishes she was dead

We have to say goodbye to

happy and hello to sad

For now


The author's comments:
This piece describes the way that other people see the way depression can transform a person. My last line really speaks the truth, we have to say goodbye to happy and hello to sad, For now. This is true, you are only sad for a little while. Not forever.

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Alibear BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2011 at 5:39 pm
Alibear BRONZE, Oakville, Other
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't have to suffer to be a poet. Adolescence is enough suffering for anyone.

heyy if you need to talk comment. im always here :)

on May. 4 2011 at 12:13 pm
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a storm, so bring your umbrella."

omg that was really good! i know exactly where you were coming from. on the outside i have "everything" and to some "have no right" to feel upset and depressed but i have almost given up and felt just like this, its nice to be reminded we aren't alone in a world full of people even though thats how we feel sometimes.

on May. 4 2011 at 10:00 am
BeautifulSkye PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
you cant live with them... you cant live without them.

this is amazing and describes exactly how i feel because i personally have depression

REMi93 GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 8:54 am
REMi93 GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Never Fails

I love this it's so beautiful and has such a deep meaning behind it. I especially love the last few lines. Keep up the good work!

Alibear BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2011 at 7:57 am
Alibear BRONZE, Oakville, Other
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't have to suffer to be a poet. Adolescence is enough suffering for anyone.

heyy thanks a lot!!! :D

vampier BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2011 at 7:42 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"my favorite thang about eating gumybares is knowing that thay wont fight you back when you bite there heads off.......!!!!!"

this i can relate 2 lol u shuold come and post some commets on my posts some time lol.....

on May. 3 2011 at 2:35 pm
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
A simple minded person can understand the most complicated things.

i can relate to this alot. its really good. you should check out my work sometime.




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