Adolescent Evolution MAG

January 22, 2008
By Hillary Duncan BRONZE, Chesterfield, Virginia
Hillary Duncan BRONZE, Chesterfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm a pilgrim on the edge, on the edge of my perception. We are travelers at the edge, we are always at the edge of our perceptions."
-Scott Mutter

I go through many stages
Of complication.
Metamorphosis is for butterflies
But this caterpillar cries
For the future,
For the creature within
That is beautiful but hidden
Words that are unwritten
Waiting to escape.

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on Sep. 8 2009 at 3:59 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Nice. I like how it makes one feel. Beautiful.

HEYkenz BRONZE said...
on Jul. 31 2009 at 3:48 am
HEYkenz BRONZE, Walnut Creek, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You can not teach love."-Someone very special to me

i love this:D

on Jul. 30 2009 at 11:09 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Beautiful, flow is excellant

on Jul. 30 2009 at 8:13 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is absolutely beautiful. The words flow perfectly together in this piece. It has a powerful meaning. I loved it! Great job. Keep it up! [lovehate29]

Rabaya GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 5:43 pm
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
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This is really good=]

on Jun. 27 2009 at 5:45 am
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Truly understanding and peaceful.

I read it and thought about the many emotions we all have. it made me feel at peace.

Keep writing!


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