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Friend or Fish?

March 25, 2011
By mar.mullen BRONZE, St. Peters, Missouri
mar.mullen BRONZE, St. Peters, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent."


A nibble: a tender tug.

The red and white bobber dips
beneath the murky lake.

Down,

down,


down.

My shaky hands
slowly wind the reel.
As potential success breathes
under my fingertips,

my line snaps.
Just what that fish wanted.

The fish, the severed line—
I’ve been used.

Stealing my pride,
the frenemies beg for each possible
remnant of energy
until they break free.
Just what they wanted.

The author's comments:
This piece was unfortunately inspired by a lost friendship. I compared a fishing experience to a friendship experience. I feel that all people can relate to this, for people get used by friends all the time.

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on Oct. 7 2012 at 8:08 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

This is sad and funny at the same time, i like it. It's almost like you're scolding the fish.... im sorry you got used by a friend, and yeah i can relate... please check out my work if you get a chance! =D