New pain

March 31, 2011
By Winniechirch SILVER, Maxwell, Iowa
Winniechirch SILVER, Maxwell, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return ~ Moulin Rouge


Life would be so much easier if i knew hot to hate, to stand up for myself before it got to late.
I Always see the brighter side, the good in everyone, But by the tI'me i see the bad, I'm to attached to run.
So i sit here and watch you play those stupid games of yours, You take away my opportunity and close all my open doors.
I want to believe it when you say "I love you", But even when you hold me close i know these words are not true.
You taught me a new kind of pain, One I'd never known, You have ripped out my fragile heart, The heart i no longer own...


The author's comments:
I wrote this for one of my friends to help her though a tough time.

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on May. 3 2011 at 11:15 am
samisback SILVER, Rock Hill, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger.
I can sleep when I'm dead.
Are you an Air Force brat?

Reminds me of myself.....good job you said it better than i could have :)

Snooty SILVER said...
on May. 3 2011 at 4:25 am
Snooty SILVER, Newgermany, Other
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Favorite Quote:
if you judge some one, you dont have time to love them . ;)

couldnt have said it better my self ;)

on May. 2 2011 at 3:07 pm
random3rainbow SILVER, Montpelier, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
be the change you want to see in this world

 love the poem it reminds me of the situation im in now.

on May. 1 2011 at 2:00 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

This is soooo goood

mvillalon said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 10:28 pm
mvillalon, Gainesville, Florida
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Woah, that was really good!

on Apr. 30 2011 at 9:47 pm
hdeneen26 BRONZE, Atglen, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Country music is three chords and the thruth.

I love this poem! It really spoke to me because there are people in my school that claim to love me and then I find out the next day that he went and told someone else that he doesn't! So I think this poem is very nice and should speak to people that have the same issues about this that you do.

on Apr. 30 2011 at 3:44 pm
Sierra379 BRONZE, Lehi, Utah
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i agree with you! love it!

on Apr. 30 2011 at 12:18 pm
MonaLisa316 GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
YOLO:you only live once

that was beautiful...wish i had a frend to do that for me

on Apr. 29 2011 at 11:40 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

Beautiful.

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:20 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

i really like this poem. it is, like others have said, intense. Fixing the simple mistakes in spelling or grammar will be easy too. your really good :)

on Apr. 29 2011 at 3:23 pm
Squitchy96 SILVER, Mmuskogee, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Carpe Dium.

Thats Amazing!!

on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:36 pm
Caitlin14 BRONZE, Michigan
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I love it! its really intence. I think it was relly cute that you wrote it for your friend

on Apr. 29 2011 at 8:35 am
Roland3100 BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
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Wow, This is some intense stuff. It makes it even more special that you wrote it for your friend. Like I said in another post you have some seriously intense talent. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your writing.

on Apr. 29 2011 at 8:33 am
jacob26950 BRONZE, Wyoming, Michigan
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i like it. some spelling errors but you can obviously fix that easily but i like how it truly spoke to me i always look on the good side of people to and it ends out badly everytime


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