I Went Place

March 24, 2011
By fromtheashes GOLD, ~~~~~, Montana
fromtheashes GOLD, ~~~~~, Montana
14 articles 6 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I took the road less traveled, and that has made all the difference"~Robert Frost


This is for all of you;
All that always thought I’d fail,
All that thought I’d result to nothing,
All that used to hate me,
All that still do,
All that said I’d go nowhere,
All that told me to give up,
All that didn’t believe in me.

Well guess what;
I didn’t fail,
I resulted to in lot,
I don’t hate myself,
I never will hate me,
I went places,
I didn’t give up,
I still believe in me.

So take that;
Take that I didn’t fail,
Take that I resulted in a lot,
Take that I never started to hate myself,
Take that I will never hate myself,
Take that I went everywhere,
Take that I didn’t give up,
Take that I still believe in me.

And remember this;
All of those times you failed,
All of those times you did nothing,
All of those times you started to hate yourself,
All of those times you never stopped hating yourself,
All of those times you went nowhere,
All of those times you gave up,
All of those times you didn’t believe in yourself.


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on Feb. 15 2013 at 12:51 am
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

athe repetiton is tiresome, but it adds so much to the poemyou can't take it away

on Aug. 28 2012 at 1:05 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Was pretty good. Maybe it's just a lapse in my brain right now but the line "resulted in a lot," doesn't really make sense to me??

on Aug. 28 2012 at 1:05 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Was pretty good. Maybe it's just a lapse in my brain right now but the line "resulted in a lot," doesn't really make sense to me??


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