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I Went Place

This is for all of you;
All that always thought I’d fail,
All that thought I’d result to nothing,
All that used to hate me,
All that still do,
All that said I’d go nowhere,
All that told me to give up,
All that didn’t believe in me.

Well guess what;
I didn’t fail,
I resulted to in lot,
I don’t hate myself,
I never will hate me,
I went places,
I didn’t give up,
I still believe in me.

So take that;
Take that I didn’t fail,
Take that I resulted in a lot,
Take that I never started to hate myself,
Take that I will never hate myself,
Take that I went everywhere,
Take that I didn’t give up,
Take that I still believe in me.

And remember this;
All of those times you failed,
All of those times you did nothing,
All of those times you started to hate yourself,
All of those times you never stopped hating yourself,
All of those times you went nowhere,
All of those times you gave up,
All of those times you didn’t believe in yourself.




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Mr.DedicatedDeterminationThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2012 at 1:05 am:
Was pretty good. Maybe it's just a lapse in my brain right now but the line "resulted in a lot," doesn't really make sense to me??
 
Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 15 at 12:51 am :
athe repetiton is tiresome, but it adds so much to the poemyou can't take it away
 
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Mr.DedicatedDeterminationThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2012 at 1:05 am:
Was pretty good. Maybe it's just a lapse in my brain right now but the line "resulted in a lot," doesn't really make sense to me??
 
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