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True Love

By , Plaquemine, LA
It feels like I have fallen in love
I have never felt this way before
This boy means the world to me
We are meant to be
He makes me feel complete
Like nothing could go wrong
My feelings are just so strong
He is everything I look for in a boy
He is better than any toy
I trust him with my heart
This love is forever





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queentabbiecat99 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 10:05 am
nice XD and optimisticpessimist I LOVE YOUR NAME XD
 
zana12 replied...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 10:22 am
wow that was really good.!
 
vampier said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 7:53 am
i like this poem a lot i thank that it is so cute....!
 
optimisticpessimist said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 8:22 pm
This poem is so cute!
 
AnnaKate said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 1:23 pm
I like the way you described your feelings.
 
zoid123 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 1:08 pm
This poem comes from the heart...they put as much feeling in it has they wanted to
 
WhiteBron said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 11:07 am
Use more feeling in your poem. Like feel the words as you write them:)
 
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