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Lonely girl in a wedding
she watches as her friend's getting married
Starting to believe that fate
won't let her find a soul mate.

Crying on the inside
as the ceremony passes by
The bride looks so happy.
Will she ever feel something like that?

First there is the exchange of rings and of vows,
then, 'You may now kiss the bride'
for both of them everything's about to change now.
She's still with no one by her side.

In the party everybody is dancing
but she doesn't have someone to dance with.
Seems like she'll dance in her life forever lonely
but if she could only see..

Lonely girl in a wedding
don't you be too worried
'cause some years from now you're married
and with a lovely kid.

You didn't use to believe in happy endings
but there's nothing wrong with it
because this was just the beggining
and you weren't lonely to beggin with .

At that wedding, could have you imagined
that by now you'd have a family?
Don't be too disappointed in life,
'cause it might surprise you sometimes.



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LedZepGurl said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 10:53 pm:
me likey! ^.^
 
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AlaskaGrownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 10:29 pm:
I like it. really good. :)
 
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dontforget This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 1:15 pm:
I like the basic concept of this but I don't really like how you have a rhyme scheme and then it just sorta disappears. With a little work, it could be even better. :)
 
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russianreader said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 12:04 pm:
I really like this...I sometimes wonder the same thing this girl does...will I ever be as happy as some of my friends with boyfriends...? :/ but good job!!
 
Camii replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 7:31 pm :
thanks! (: and don't worry you will find love someday and until then you can be happy too (:
 
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