Lonely girl in a wedding

March 27, 2011
By Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Lonely girl in a wedding
she watches as her friend's getting married
Starting to believe that fate
won't let her find a soul mate.

Crying on the inside
as the ceremony passes by
The bride looks so happy.
Will she ever feel something like that?

First there is the exchange of rings and of vows,
then, 'You may now kiss the bride'
for both of them everything's about to change now.
She's still with no one by her side.

In the party everybody is dancing
but she doesn't have someone to dance with.
Seems like she'll dance in her life forever lonely
but if she could only see..

Lonely girl in a wedding
don't you be too worried
'cause some years from now you're married
and with a lovely kid.

You didn't use to believe in happy endings
but there's nothing wrong with it
because this was just the beggining
and you weren't lonely to beggin with .

At that wedding, could have you imagined
that by now you'd have a family?
Don't be too disappointed in life,
'cause it might surprise you sometimes.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.


on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:53 pm
TheDarkSideofZeppelin SILVER, Inglewood, California
6 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a woman's body, but a child's emotions"
- Elizabeth Taylor

me likey! ^.^

on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:29 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I like it. really good. :)

on Sep. 13 2011 at 1:15 pm
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
15 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

I like the basic concept of this but I don't really like how you have a rhyme scheme and then it just sorta disappears. With a little work, it could be even better. :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 7:31 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks! (: and don't worry you will find love someday and until then you can be happy too (:

on Jun. 17 2011 at 12:04 pm
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
2 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."

I really like this...I sometimes wonder the same thing this girl does...will I ever be as happy as some of my friends with boyfriends...? :/ but good job!!


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!