A untouched earth dream

March 24, 2011
By bochoyboy SILVER, Hersey, Michigan
bochoyboy SILVER, Hersey, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
" Time for an adventure" - mike macdonald


there is a place I know
that is natural and slow
a place where the river runs
and the trees weigh tons

its brodened sun knows the clouds
and the grass grows in shrouds
people don't care for the time
they just care for the sunshine

the lizards sit for a tan
because they have no fear of man
but we couldn't be bothered to seem
because its all a dream



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on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:45 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

I will gladly answer your question, but first, What do you mean?

on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:02 pm
bochoyboy SILVER, Hersey, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Time for an adventure" - mike macdonald

hey can I ask you why you made the choices you did in the contest?

on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:48 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Very cute! The title should have been "An" but other than that - great job! I really like the part about the lizard! So cute.

on Jul. 29 2011 at 5:44 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 353 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

this place sounds wonderful! i want to go there. The way you wrote this poem put me at ease, i felt like i was there and at peace. One thing: this is how broadened is spelled! thank you very much for entering in the contest and what a great poem! :)


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