Breathless

March 26, 2011
By Skyeblu BRONZE, Lawton, Oklahoma
Skyeblu BRONZE, Lawton, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You are you. Now, isn't that pleasant?"
-Dr.Seuss
"I was going to buy a copy of "The Power of Positive Thinking", and then I thought: What the hell good would that do?"
-Ronnie Shakes


I don't understand my frustration doesn't end.
How can you be here then gone?
How are we suppose to carry on?
My hearts exploding in my chest.
My feelings are stronger then depressed.
I wish every breath I take, was my last.
I keep living in the past.
How did it all happen so fast?
I was hanging out with my friends Having a good day,
as your soul was flying away.
I have many regrets about that day,
I hoped everything would be okay.
It wasn't, you were dead,
I wanted to be in your stead.
My mind went blank, I think I started screaming.
I woke up thinking I was just dreaming.
I wasn't, you were really gone,
and now I must carry on.


The author's comments:
I was inspired by my cousin, she died two years ago.

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Skyeblu BRONZE said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:17 pm
Skyeblu BRONZE, Lawton, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You are you. Now, isn't that pleasant?"
-Dr.Seuss
"I was going to buy a copy of "The Power of Positive Thinking", and then I thought: What the hell good would that do?"
-Ronnie Shakes

Thank you very much! I really appreciate it. It was difficult to get through but time really is a great thing. Thanks for the comment:)

on Feb. 3 2012 at 5:33 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

This is a very good poem, i love the rhyming, but... what it's about is very sad :( however, 5/5 :)


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