mom, i'm starving

March 26, 2011
By corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
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and it’s not a hunger pang that
your warm, winter stew can satisfy.
well, i mean, sure it’ll fill me up,
heat me up, right through my toes,
but i’m still hungry.
i’ve never tasted love,
someone’s delectable touch
i want so badly,
to indulge in warm laughter.
please envelop
my fractures


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on Aug. 14 2011 at 3:59 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

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Very good job!!!! I really liked it although you might want to cpitalize the "I"  the end needs a period.  But very good job keep writing!!!! :D

on Aug. 4 2011 at 1:53 pm
corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
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Thank you!

on Aug. 4 2011 at 12:17 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Very good! Nice concept.




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