mom, i'm starving

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and it’s not a hunger pang that
your warm, winter stew can satisfy.
well, i mean, sure it’ll fill me up,
heat me up, right through my toes,
but i’m still hungry.
i’ve never tasted love,
someone’s delectable touch
i want so badly,
to indulge in warm laughter.
please envelop
my fractures





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JoPepper said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 3:59 pm
Very good job!!!! I really liked it although you might want to cpitalize the "I"  the end needs a period.  But very good job keep writing!!!! :D
 
Raytheraym said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 12:17 pm
Very good! Nice concept.
 
corallee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 1:53 pm
Thank you!
 
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