Let's Get Lost Together

You tell me you don’t know
Where we’re headed
I Say
“Babe that’s just fine
By me”
As long as we
Are moving forward
There is no place
I’d rather be





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BriarRose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 1:36 pm

very good =] i like the way you opted to rhyme the piece, it flows very well...is there more to this? You could definitely add on, and with your style, it'd be just as good...This piece feels like the beginning of something biggger

 

Either way, its really great

 
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