Old Oak Tree MAG

April 20, 2011
By Megan Leonard BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
Megan Leonard BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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A dazzling flash of bright lightning.
a deafening crash of thunder,
as an old oak tree,
sways in the fierce wind.
Droplets of rain
soaking anything they can get their hands on.
My father drives,
faster and faster,
begging to get out of the violent storm.
The streets beginning to flood,
and the large tree still threatens to fall,
looming over to saturated grass.
Finally,
the decrepit tree snaps,
falling onto the emerald green van,
crushing him,
inches in front of my face.
Someone screams.
I realize it’s me.
Terrified and alone,
the car wrapped in a fiery glow,
the crash of a window being shattered fillsmy ears.
Someone found me,
and saved my four-year-old life.
Sirens in the background,
red and blue lights flashing all around.
Paramedics,
firemen,
policemen
surrounding me,
I only want my dad.
But it doesn’t matter that I want him,
because he’s gone.
Taken by an old oak tree.


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bubbles318 said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 12:29 pm
bubbles318, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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The imagry and flow is really great




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