What I Know MAG

April 20, 2011
By Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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t is at that point when legions
of goose bumps roar out along my arms
At that point when I feel my lungs inflate
In a gasp of wonder
At that point when my thoughts bend in ways
I’ve never imagined
At that point of sudden
And blazing light
That I know I’ve known a Poet.


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on Feb. 20 2013 at 1:53 am
hudsonbytheday PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The mind is a place in its self, it can make a heaven from hell, a hell from heaven.
- John Milton

At first I thought that you meant "t" to mean a crossroads or intersection so maybe it was a worthwhile glitch anyway, Cool use of line breaks with no punctuation,

on Sep. 7 2012 at 10:16 pm
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
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I like how although it's a freeverse poem, there's a definite flow to it. Nice work :)

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on Jul. 2 2012 at 10:40 am
Dynamo DIAMOND, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I used to think falling in love would be personal. But it's all a big public show.

Brilliant....a truly inspirational poem and no mistake.

on Jan. 22 2012 at 6:19 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

sort of confusing, but i get what you're trying to capture. this could be a classic in years to come--probably after you're dead, but if it's any comfort, i think literary immortality is worth the inconvenience :P

on Dec. 3 2011 at 9:12 pm
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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'It'. Sometimes there's glitches when you submit to the site, and unfortunately, you can't edit after it's been posted. (Oddly enough, it was printed correctly in the magazine).

on Dec. 3 2011 at 7:06 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
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Very confusing.  Is it supposed to begin with "t" or "it?"  

on Oct. 24 2011 at 3:05 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I really like this!  Congrats on getting it published :D

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on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:35 pm
you are so awesome! You are so cool! YA YA YA YA!!!

on Jul. 27 2011 at 5:49 pm
yousaypotato... SILVER, Peacedale, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"A good friend will bail you out of jail. But a best friend will be sitting right there with you saying 'Dang, we really screwed up this time.'"

ohhhhh. gotcha. I totally get it now. It's relly good now that I understand it :) I love your other stuff too!!!!! check out mine?

on Jul. 27 2011 at 10:03 am
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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The feeling you get when you read a really awesome poem. The one that inspired this is 'Jetliner', by Naoshi Koriyama.

on Jul. 27 2011 at 7:55 am
yousaypotato... SILVER, Peacedale, Rhode Island
9 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A good friend will bail you out of jail. But a best friend will be sitting right there with you saying 'Dang, we really screwed up this time.'"

I really like it. a lot. but i kind of dont get it...what is it about??




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