Fear MAG

April 20, 2011
By Maggie Duncan BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
Maggie Duncan BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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The beast roars
and tears through the house,
roaming from room
to room.
Not a corner
is spared from its unearthly growl.
Its malice-filled eyes glow in determined
pursuit of its next meal.
I seek refuge
in my room
but hear the thing draw ever closer.
Terror freezes my limbs.
My thoughts churn –
I haven’t seen Paris!
I haven’t gotten my driver’s license!
I haven’t ridden in the Oscar Meyer
Weiner Mobile!
But then
I hear a whir
and the ominous snarling
I peek out just in time
to see Mom store the vacuum

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on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:47 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

i agree with debbie1. how you consume the reader with descriptions of nightmare fears and then give them something entirely different is great. please can u check out some of my work?

Debbie1 SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2011 at 8:53 pm
Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is life, there is hope."

Omg! This poem was beautiful! I loved the way you made the reader think one thing...only to find out it's something entirely different!

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