Thin Ice

March 20, 2011
By red_roses GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
red_roses GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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I thought I would love you forever. You said you felt the same way. But being around each other, put in jeopardy our whole day. When we're together it's like walking on a frozen pond. Sometimes there's thin ice. And even though we were so fond, our love fell through... did not suffice.

The author's comments:
We thought we loved each other but we drifted a part.

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on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:10 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow..It is sad..But this is really really good! I love the wording you chose it flowed smoothely with your poem! Keep up the great work!

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