Thin Ice

March 20, 2011
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I thought I would love you forever. You said you felt the same way. But being around each other, put in jeopardy our whole day. When we're together it's like walking on a frozen pond. Sometimes there's thin ice. And even though we were so fond, our love fell through... did not suffice.

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SuNshiNe007 said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 8:10 am
Wow..It is sad..But this is really really good! I love the wording you chose it flowed smoothely with your poem! Keep up the great work!
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