One Day She'll See

March 22, 2011
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She's dying inside
cant you see? S
She's cold to the bone
and one day...
she'll wake up...
and know she's alone.L
Like dust in wind
she'll be gone.
For she fears if she lets go
it will be the last time.

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skisoul96 said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 10:28 am
rlly good poem, its nice n short n to the point but at same time has the chilling affect its supposed to have, just wonderin wat r the S&L for at the ned of two lines?
Rory7 replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 4:22 pm
they aren't anything, i don't know why they are there i think i must have screwed up with the typing or something
skisoul96 replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 8:42 pm
lol i thought they mite have had some rlly meaningful reason that i was stupidly missing(not a first) but ok thats kewl...awesum poem!
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