You Are the Lyrics In Me

March 14, 2011
What is a song
Without the lyrics?
Just a pretty melody
Without a soul.

Words give those pleasant tunes
And intention behind the layer of flowing notes.

You are the lyrics to my melody.
You are
The purpose
And intention in my life.

Without you
I am just a pretty melody.
Nothing more.

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Afra- said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 1:02 am
This is a lovely poem.
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:48 pm



Stpaulian said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 7:34 pm
Wow that was sweet and very light. Its a great change from all the heartbreak poems people write. Great job!
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:48 pm
Haha, thanks. BTW, I'm actually one of those heartbreak writers, but I wanted to take a break from all of that crazily depressing stuff!
RachelEliza said...
May 19, 2011 at 4:41 pm
I really like this , I feel like that sometimes ' and its great to see someone else thinks the way I do .
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:47 pm

Lol, and thats how I feel too.


Mockingbird361 said...
May 17, 2011 at 7:34 pm
very good i like it a lot well written
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:47 pm
Thanks, and I love your screenname! You must also be a Hunger Games fan. Love that series!
M.A.M. said...
May 7, 2011 at 10:13 am
I know you wrote this about your mom but it reminds me of my BF.
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:46 pm

Yeah...even tho I wrote it about my mom, it could be about anybody you really love.


bbeast said...
May 2, 2011 at 4:13 pm
Awesome. There is a really cool message here. Thanks!
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
May 3, 2011 at 3:54 pm
Thanks my mom actually has cancer, and i wrote this after thinking about what life would be like without her, and realized, I basically couldn't live without her....anyways, I really am grateful for all your support. 8)
bbeast replied...
May 3, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Sorry about your mom. I hope it's not too serious.
PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 6:20 pm
im going through all your work  your a great poet  keep it up
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
May 1, 2011 at 11:34 am
Thanks so much, that means a lot. I read all of your work too, and you're amazing! Thank you again!
bieberl0ve15 said...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 11:03 am
I agree with Karma..This is so good! I'm looking through all your pieces now. Please comment/rate mine too! It's called Asthma. Thanks :)
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
May 1, 2011 at 11:33 am
Thank you so much bieberl0ve15! I read Asthma, and it was amazing! Thanks again!
Karma said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 8:35 pm
Dont get why I am the first to comment, this Poem is AMAZING!!!
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
May 1, 2011 at 11:32 am
Sorry 4 the late reply, but thank you so much!!!! I really really really appreciate it!
ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 4:08 pm
Hey guys, thanks so much for checking out my poem!!! Whoever reads this, please please PLEASE comment on it, or rate it. Thanks!8)
KJAngelAuthor replied...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 1:31 pm
No comment I could make or rating I could give could bring to light your gift. Keep it up, it was amazing!
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