You Are the Lyrics In Me

March 14, 2011
What is a song
Without the lyrics?
Just a pretty melody
Without a soul.

Words give those pleasant tunes
And intention behind the layer of flowing notes.

You are the lyrics to my melody.
You are
The purpose
And intention in my life.

Without you
I am just a pretty melody.
Nothing more.

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musicluvr3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2012 at 11:44 pm
Love this (: One of the best music analogies I've seen! (: keep it up!!
LifesIllusion said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 8:21 am
I really like this piece because I feel like you made it relatable for everyone and thats hard to do! Im going to check out the rest of your work. love it:) i would really like your feedback on my work too if you don't mind, Different and The Friend Wars. Thanks!
CaeCae97 said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 9:42 pm
I've been reading more and more of your work, and I have to say I love it! Keep on writing.
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:02 pm
VERY VERY GOOD!!! U ROCK!!! i love the message. I love writing, and when i write i like putting at least a tiny part of myself in my story. Great job and keep on writing!!! :)(:
ExpRESsY0uRse1F replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 7:48 pm
Lol, and thank you!
RhythmAndRhyme said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:16 pm
What a cool way to look at love....
ExpRESsY0uRse1F replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 9:21 am
Thank you!
WildeWriter said...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 4:42 pm
Great work :) love the message!
ExpRESsY0uRse1F replied...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 5:46 pm
Lol, thanks!!!
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 4:37 pm
Oh wow, short and sweet and to the point once again, I do believe that you have a gift :) Consider this favorited and bookmarked.
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 10:50 am
Lol thank you!!!
sunshine04 said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 10:50 am
that super rated 5 out of 5
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 2:13 pm
Why thank you! :)
sunshine04 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 2:03 am
it awesome and a good break from the depressing stuffs and i am also one of the writers who write depressing stuffs
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 8:00 pm
Haha I'm also one of the writers who writes depressing stuffs, but I decided to take a break from all the sadness. :)
sunshine04 replied...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 5:39 am
yea its cool
ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 8:01 pm
I just wanted to say if anyone has anything they want me to check out, please let me know. :) I really appreciate all of your feedback, and would like to give you some if you want it.
midniteprowl said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 3:10 pm
rated 5 stars, girl! ;D
ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:49 pm

Lol, and thank yooooou!!!! :)


Afra- said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 1:02 am
This is a lovely poem.
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