You Are the Lyrics In Me

March 14, 2011
By rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.


What is a song
Without the lyrics?
Nothing.
Just a pretty melody
Without a soul.

Words give those pleasant tunes
Purpose
Definition
And intention behind the layer of flowing notes.

You are the lyrics to my melody.
You are
The purpose
Definition
And intention in my life.

Without you
I am just a pretty melody.
Nothing more.



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on May. 18 2012 at 11:44 pm
musicluvr3 GOLD, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Cry. It shows you care."

Love this (: One of the best music analogies I've seen! (: keep it up!!

on Nov. 24 2011 at 8:21 am
LifesIllusion BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let your fears slow you down. Instead, chase them down and beat them."

I really like this piece because I feel like you made it relatable for everyone and thats hard to do! Im going to check out the rest of your work. love it:) i would really like your feedback on my work too if you don't mind, Different and The Friend Wars. Thanks!

on Oct. 18 2011 at 9:42 pm
Miki-chan BRONZE, Waynesboro, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't screw with Crazy.

I've been reading more and more of your work, and I have to say I love it! Keep on writing.

on Sep. 19 2011 at 1:31 pm
KJAngelAuthor SILVER, Holland, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
With understanding comes wisdom.

No comment I could make or rating I could give could bring to light your gift. Keep it up, it was amazing!

on Jul. 26 2011 at 7:48 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Lol, and thank you!

on Jul. 23 2011 at 9:02 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

VERY VERY GOOD!!! U ROCK!!! i love the message. I love writing, and when i write i like putting at least a tiny part of myself in my story. Great job and keep on writing!!! :)(:

on Jun. 26 2011 at 9:21 am
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Thank you!

on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:16 pm
RhythmAndRhyme BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's no half-singing in the shower, you're either a rock star or an opera diva." ~~Josh Groban

What a cool way to look at love....

on Jun. 24 2011 at 5:46 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Lol, thanks!!!

on Jun. 24 2011 at 4:42 pm
WildeWriter BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
2 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you believe you can make a living as a writer, you already have enough ego already."

Great work :) love the message!

on Jun. 19 2011 at 5:39 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
1 article 3 photos 253 comments
yea its cool

on Jun. 18 2011 at 8:00 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Haha I'm also one of the writers who writes depressing stuffs, but I decided to take a break from all the sadness. :)

on Jun. 18 2011 at 10:50 am
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Lol thank you!!!

on Jun. 17 2011 at 4:37 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Oh wow, short and sweet and to the point once again, I do believe that you have a gift :) Consider this favorited and bookmarked.

on Jun. 17 2011 at 2:03 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
1 article 3 photos 253 comments
it awesome and a good break from the depressing stuffs and i am also one of the writers who write depressing stuffs

on Jun. 16 2011 at 2:13 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Why thank you! :)

on Jun. 15 2011 at 10:50 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
1 article 3 photos 253 comments
that super rated 5 out of 5

on Jun. 12 2011 at 8:01 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

I just wanted to say if anyone has anything they want me to check out, please let me know. :) I really appreciate all of your feedback, and would like to give you some if you want it.

on Jun. 8 2011 at 7:49 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Lol, and thank yooooou!!!! :)

 


on Jun. 8 2011 at 7:48 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

THANKS! :)

 



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