Remembering Spring

March 14, 2011
Has held the buds of spring
In its icy fist
For long enough.
The chirping of the robin
Echoes in my memory.
Barely there
It has survived the harsh months
Of frigid gales
And icy walkways.
Spring will break free
Soon enough.
And with it
Will come new life
And new hope.

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bbeast said...
May 2, 2011 at 4:15 pm
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May 3, 2011 at 3:52 pm
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PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 6:20 pm
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ExpRESsY0uRselF replied...
May 1, 2011 at 11:36 am
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Apr. 18, 2011 at 6:57 pm
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Apr. 19, 2011 at 2:33 pm
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ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 4:12 pm
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