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March 7, 2011
By nyyami SILVER, Staunton, Virginia
nyyami SILVER, Staunton, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Either there's no way to live, or I don't know how."


Whisper, giggle, turn.

Turning, looking, questioning eyes.

looking at me

not seeing, just look.

Catch the gaze.

Not a word is spoken.

But shining eyes stare

Then avert.

Look away.

Looking to the floor.

not to me.

not seeing me.

invisibility.

Running in my head

Running, crying, escaping.

turn, giggle, whisper.

Waiting for a day that's

never coming.

Watching him turn again.

Grabbing, cocking, aiming

shiny gray gun in his hands

BOOM.

Leaving,

Dying.

Not crying.

Day coming, day left.

Is he finally happy?

looks.

He looks at me.

Kept my gaze.



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on Aug. 20 2012 at 4:34 pm
allaboutmylife PLATINUM, Miami, Florida
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this is so well written and its written in such a choppy way  which gives it more of an edge keep writing  

Inksy SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 3:12 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Wow! This is beautiful! I love all of the emotion you put into this. Keep writing, you have amazing talent (: 5/5 Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!

on Dec. 9 2011 at 7:31 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
1 article 0 photos 273 comments

Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

Beautifully written nyyami :D you're so talented! Keep posting! :) xx. And thank youu! 

on Nov. 8 2011 at 4:29 pm
Aubrie PLATINUM, Lancaster, Ohio
20 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for what I am than loved for what I am not." -Kurt Cobain
"you know my name, but you don't know my story."
"The only true mistake is the one you don't learn from."

This is GREAT. You get the point across in your selection of words, sometimes staccato sentences make fantastic poems like this one.

sumleng GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 4:04 pm
sumleng GOLD, Wayne, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 5 comments
I like this! Lots of emotion is so few words. Please check out my poetry too! :)

SmileyFace13 said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 4:58 pm
I reall like this :)

spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 11:53 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

good job...rated u 5/5....visit me plzz...and comment...keep it up


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