When Will It End?

March 6, 2011
Daily torture
tears everyday
don't know how to stop it
they find me everywhere I go
can''t think,
can''t sleep
am worried about what will happen
as i turn this very corner
thought you would protect me,
but you''re the one causing me pain
both physically and mentally
i''m struggling to hold this weight
the more I live,
the heavier I get
till I fall down,
and wear away

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Dreammer said...
Aug. 20, 2012 at 1:49 pm
very well written
Inksplotch said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 3:17 pm
Wow! This is really well done! You are a beautiful writer. This is really emotional and powerful. Keep posting (: 5/5 Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!
Guatemalianchic27 replied...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 12:57 pm
i lurve chu 2 ;3
Lola_Black said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 1:42 pm
That was pretty freakin' good! Been there before. Then I decided to just stop caring. For anyone who is being bullied mentally/ emotionally, you really stop caring what people think of you when you realize how little they actually think of you. As for anyone being physically bullied, just listen to WeAllBurn.
Guatemalianchic27 replied...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 12:56 pm
i lurve chu
smilemaker20 said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 8:45 am
I know why it's like to go through that. Just keep walking with your head up! Great poem, when I first read it I was like wow that could be for me!!! :) amazing
Guatemalianchic27 replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 8:52 am



chrissie_star said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:03 am
great poem.. very true. will you check out my poem? its called "possibilities"
WeAllBurn said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 2:48 pm

i have been there, and it is hard.

amazing depiction thoug, 5/5.

i used to be afraid to go to school until one day i snapped. i showed that i am not a "wuss" and started to fight back. the bullying stopped then.

if its physical abuse, fight them. a few punches can go a lonnnnggggggg way man.

good luck (: and i'm here if you need to talk.


Guatemalianchic27 replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 6:29 pm
I understand, and i mean its great that you were able to realize that what they were doing wasn't right:)
spency said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:55 am
this is good....good job keep it up ok....rated u 5/5...visit me plzzz and comment
Guatemalianchic27 replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 6:30 pm
thank you!
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