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When Will It End?

March 6, 2011
By StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
What does not destroy me only makes me stronger


Daily torture
tears everyday
don't know how to stop it
they find me everywhere I go
can''t think,
can''t sleep
am worried about what will happen
as i turn this very corner
thought you would protect me,
but you''re the one causing me pain
both physically and mentally
i''m struggling to hold this weight
the more I live,
the heavier I get
till I fall down,
and wear away


The author's comments:
I was at a bullying conference in my school, and I started writing the first few lines, until i felt the words skipping and finding a place on the paper,showing the pain that many kids go through.

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Dreammer GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2012 at 1:49 pm
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out

very well written

on Mar. 14 2012 at 12:57 pm
StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
What does not destroy me only makes me stronger

i lurve chu 2 ;3

on Mar. 14 2012 at 12:56 pm
StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
What does not destroy me only makes me stronger

i lurve chu

Inksy SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 3:17 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Wow! This is really well done! You are a beautiful writer. This is really emotional and powerful. Keep posting (: 5/5 Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:52 am
StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
What does not destroy me only makes me stronger

thx

 


on Sep. 25 2011 at 1:42 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
11 articles 2 photos 276 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

That was pretty freakin' good! Been there before. Then I decided to just stop caring. For anyone who is being bullied mentally/ emotionally, you really stop caring what people think of you when you realize how little they actually think of you. As for anyone being physically bullied, just listen to WeAllBurn.

on Aug. 12 2011 at 8:45 am
smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!" "If it is to be, it is up to me." "I am comfortable being uncomfortable!" -Steve Nash

I know why it's like to go through that. Just keep walking with your head up! Great poem, when I first read it I was like wow that could be for me!!! :) amazing

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:03 am
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

great poem.. very true. will you check out my poem? its called "possibilities"

on Jun. 7 2011 at 6:30 pm
StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
What does not destroy me only makes me stronger

thank you!

on Jun. 7 2011 at 6:29 pm
StephanieI SILVER, New York, New York
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
What does not destroy me only makes me stronger

I understand, and i mean its great that you were able to realize that what they were doing wasn't right:)

on Jun. 7 2011 at 2:48 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

i have been there, and it is hard.

amazing depiction thoug, 5/5.

i used to be afraid to go to school until one day i snapped. i showed that i am not a "wuss" and started to fight back. the bullying stopped then.

if its physical abuse, fight them. a few punches can go a lonnnnggggggg way man.

good luck (: and i'm here if you need to talk.

 


spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 11:55 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

this is good....good job keep it up ok....rated u 5/5...visit me plzzz and comment


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