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I'm drowning.
I'm drowning in my tears and despair, I'm holding on just barely.
Because nobody can see through my lies, through this persona I hide behind.
I use this pretty face, the dimples, curls, and big blue eyes
This sweet soft spoken voice
This soft skin that blushes at the slightest sound
To make everybody think that I am okay.
But look into my blue eyes
And tell me that you love me
And you'll see the disbelief.
He did that to me.
So while the world keeps spinning around
I'm gonna fall apart
But pretend that I'm okay.
And you won't know the difference.
Would it matter to anybody
If they knew I was drifting away?
I'm so far gone, I can barely see you standing there.
I'm so far gone, I'm on the verge of not really being able to care.
You thought you knew me
Well you were wrong.
Guess I really am
A tragic
Love song.




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Yourboggert1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 3, 2012 at 7:59 am:
i can dig it.
 
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InksplotchThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 3:20 pm:
FANTASTIC. I'm pretty sure I'm going to be putting this on my favorites... it's beautiful. And soooo relateable. Just... wow. Keep writing, you're amazing. Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!
 
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Aubrie said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 4:31 pm:
WONDERFUL poem. Enough said.
 
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SmileyFace13 said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 5:02 pm:
This is freaking beautiful!! :) i really love it, and i know how it feels to hid behind a smile and trust me it gets better :) i've never been happier. and be proud your an amazing writer full of passion that shows through your work.
 
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Lola_Black said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 1:45 pm:
That was beautiful. And yeah, love has a way of doing that to you, doesn't it? Feel free to read any of my poems.
 
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EyesofBlueFireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 12:25 pm:
This was really good. Some of your rhythm seems to slip, but the passion behind the words makes up for that. The technical stuff is nothing to the feeling I got after I read your poem. Keep writing, and remember to keep your head up, you can't always hide.
 
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spencyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:56 am:
good job rated u 5/5.....visit me plzz and comment...thank u
 
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