March 17, 2011
By kierak13 BRONZE, Missoula, Montana
kierak13 BRONZE, Missoula, Montana
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Red--then to Black
All around me I can see
Shadows begin to circle me
Am I floating or falling?
Pressure on my chest
My head is burning, burning
Surrounded by people
Impact on my arm, a crash
A scream
someone's touch
Pulling me
I don't if I can respond
where am I
who am I
What is going on?
shooting pain and quivering
I can't move

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