Listening Trees

March 15, 2011
The trees are reaching out to you
capturing you in thier grasp
thrashing viciously trying to escape
but attached to you like tape
you struggle hard to get out
realizing it's to late to leave
letting them take over you
wondering what they're going to do
they pull you in all the way
everything goes dark as black
can use only four senses and
trapped inside by large fences
you scream and shout
cry, pout, fight, and pray
finally relax and calm down
then they put you back on the ground

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wishonastar said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 4:27 pm
This is really good. I like your inspiration for this. I love when that kind of thing happens.
Anagam said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 2:22 pm
Omg :D Unique poem! I would love to know what inspired you to write it :)
Little-Irish-Girl replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 2:26 pm
Thankyou very much. I'm not quite sure what inspired me but I was looking out my bedroom window and I have these really big trees in my front yard. I felt like writing so I wrote about the trees and this is how it turned out. Again thankyou so much for your comment. :)
Anagam replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 9:10 am
That is very neat :) I've read other poems where users are inspired by the tree outside their windows. And you are very very welcome.
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