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I wake up gasping; terrified
Skin in a cold sweat.
Same nightmare
Same faces
I saw you with her
Your arms caressing her
Her smooth face cupped in your loving hands
It kills me
A blade through my heard is less painful
I would rather die a thousand painful deaths
Than even think of you being with her.
The very idea of you with another
Brings tears to my eyes
And cries from my breaking heart



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amandadel said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 1:26 pm:
I accidently rated it only two stars because it was the first time i was rating something! I'm sorry its definitely more than that! I really liked it. (:
 
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Victoria_P said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:25 am:
this is a great article. i can really realte to this.. keep up the great work. (: you should check my work out sometime.
 
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kdwern said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 2:28 pm:
im awesome
 
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LaShay_25 said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 10:12 am:
Aww...can really relate to this, expecially when my prom is coming soon and yeah.. I think your an awesome writer, please keep writting with all your emotions =]
 
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LoveyouinmyfantasyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 8:51 am:
I love it                                       
 
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