Save Me

March 16, 2011
By Anonymous

Is this what it’s come to,

Emptiness inside,

I need a refill,

But I am not searching,

Here I am standing still,

The dead star won’t shine once again,

It’s dimmed forever,

Forever is an awfully long time,

No one to save me,

From losing eternity,

No one helps,

Sadness deepens,

I’m falling more every day,

I’m fading away,

Someone save me,

I don’t want to burn,

It’s coming so close,

Soon there will be no forgiveness,

I’m going to die,

And while alive,

I’m buried in the darkness,

How can I survive,


Save me from this,

You’re the only one who cares,

The only one who knows,

The others don’t care,

My state of mind is going unclear,

Save me Lord,

My dead day is almost here.

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on Apr. 15 2011 at 2:57 pm
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
A simple minded person can understand the most complicated things.

you did a very good job. you really let your emotions fly on the paper. you did a very good job with letting your words create images. i can relate, so i guess that's why i like it so much.

you should check some of my work.

MusicSoul666 said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 8:36 pm
MusicSoul666, New Haven, Connecticut
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There Is Lots Of Pain In Your Words. .


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