this is goodbye

March 7, 2011
By tamsabri123 BRONZE, Hopkins, Minnesota
tamsabri123 BRONZE, Hopkins, Minnesota
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the hope is fading from my eyes,
i've come to the conclusion,
there's nothing that i can do,
the moon seems smaller,
and the stars don't shine like they used to,
it's been eating at my insides,
until i finally confronted reality.
the insecurities aren't even there,
days feel like months.
time begins to die,
the aspirations are slipping away,
no feeling left inside,
numbness is the prey,
all happiness fades.

The author's comments:
it was just an emotional expression of the way i've been feeling lately.

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DaftIAm BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2011 at 9:48 pm
DaftIAm BRONZE, Kirkland, Washington
2 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life too seriously. You'll never make it out alive anyways."

I know how that feels. Awesome word choice, and I love how the picture totally goes with the poem! (: Great work


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