Alone

March 7, 2011
She feels so alone
By herself,
Like no one wants to be around her.
Her friends seem to be annoyed with her.
Her parents don't understand.
Her boyfriend seems to be moving farther away from her.
She cries in the night so alone
So confused.
No one sees the pain she goes through
No one sees how alone in this world she is.
No one sees it but her.
She finally sees an old friend
A friend that made her smile,
A friend that made her feel loved.
But then people come and take her friend away from her.





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sunshine7223 said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 3:18 pm
This really speaks to me. I used to feel quite similar. I completely relate to the purpose of this poem. Well, the purpose I got from it anyways. Sometimes it really does seem like something good in our life happens only to be taken away from us. I felt like that for quite some time actually. It's a sucky feel. Great job! :) I liked it! Keep writing!!! :)))
 
sunshine7223 replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 3:19 pm
a sucky feeling*
 
darksky said...
Sept. 18, 2011 at 3:00 pm
wow, that was amazing. it really spoke out to me.
 
brokenangel14 replied...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 2:20 pm
That what I try with my poems. I hope that they tell the stories I can't tell, I hope they speak to my readers and amaze them.
 
HunnyBun said...
May 24, 2011 at 8:03 am
yea i know. but i'm fine with people knowing that i wrote them. cause some of the people don't even know who i am on this thing lol. :) but anyways how long will it take them to look at the poems and post them??? cause now i have 4 uppppp
 
brokenangel14 replied...
May 24, 2011 at 8:05 am
bout 2weeks to 3months. They don't just have yours to read ya know! :D Buut people will love yours just like how I do <3
 
BrokenHeartedAngel96 said...
May 20, 2011 at 9:58 am
i'm ok with people knowing it is me. but when my laptop is done being fixed i'm always gona be on this at home lol. and yesh, yesh  you are influencing mez xD :P <3 haha :)
 
BrokenHeartedAngel96 said...
May 20, 2011 at 9:50 am
good job haley :) luv u lol <3
 
brokenangel14 replied...
May 20, 2011 at 9:51 am
heheehee thanks chaie <3 glad you like it there is more where that came from :D
 
BrokenHeartedAngel96 replied...
May 20, 2011 at 9:52 am
good. i hope mine gets posted =/ i'm nervous about it going up. i've never posted my work up for other people to see =/
 
brokenangel14 replied...
May 20, 2011 at 9:55 am
ya know you can go anomonoys so ppl dont know its you xD or ya ppeople know it is you :D anyways I read your work and I loved it.. So much feeling good job :D im influencing on you with my poetry <3
 
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