Alone

March 7, 2011
By HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment </3"
"When the going gets tough, knock someone out" ;D <3
"It's easy to fail, hard to succeed"


She feels so alone
By herself,
Like no one wants to be around her.
Her friends seem to be annoyed with her.
Her parents don't understand.
Her boyfriend seems to be moving farther away from her.
She cries in the night so alone
So confused.
No one sees the pain she goes through
No one sees how alone in this world she is.
No one sees it but her.
She finally sees an old friend
A friend that made her smile,
A friend that made her feel loved.
But then people come and take her friend away from her.

The author's comments:
A girl feels lost in the world and once a friend that had her feel loved came people took that friend away. I hope people see that people can feel things that no one else knows. No one sees how she feels.And dont take something that can make someone happy, you never know that could be there only thing for happiness.

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on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:19 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

a sucky feeling*

on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:18 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

This really speaks to me. I used to feel quite similar. I completely relate to the purpose of this poem. Well, the purpose I got from it anyways. Sometimes it really does seem like something good in our life happens only to be taken away from us. I felt like that for quite some time actually. It's a sucky feel. Great job! :) I liked it! Keep writing!!! :)))

on Sep. 21 2011 at 2:20 pm
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment </3"
"When the going gets tough, knock someone out" ;D <3
"It's easy to fail, hard to succeed"

That what I try with my poems. I hope that they tell the stories I can't tell, I hope they speak to my readers and amaze them.

darksky said...
on Sep. 18 2011 at 3:00 pm
darksky, Granada Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
\"As we grow up, we learn that the one person who isn\'t supposed to let you down, probably will, and the one person that you never thought would be there for you, is. You\'re going to have fights with your friends, you\'re going to lose some of your friends, you may even fall in love with one of your friends. You will eventually lose someone you love, and love someone you never thought you\'d find. People are going to hate you, love you, love to hate you, and hate to love you, but the ones you mean the most to you will always be there.\"- Sex and The City

wow, that was amazing. it really spoke out to me.

on May. 24 2011 at 8:05 am
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment </3"
"When the going gets tough, knock someone out" ;D <3
"It's easy to fail, hard to succeed"

bout 2weeks to 3months. They don't just have yours to read ya know! :D Buut people will love yours just like how I do <3

on May. 24 2011 at 8:03 am
HunnyBun BRONZE, Johnston, Rhode Island
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yea i know. but i'm fine with people knowing that i wrote them. cause some of the people don't even know who i am on this thing lol. :) but anyways how long will it take them to look at the poems and post them??? cause now i have 4 uppppp

on May. 20 2011 at 9:58 am
HunnyBun BRONZE, Johnston, Rhode Island
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i'm ok with people knowing it is me. but when my laptop is done being fixed i'm always gona be on this at home lol. and yesh, yesh  you are influencing mez xD :P <3 haha :)

on May. 20 2011 at 9:55 am
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment </3"
"When the going gets tough, knock someone out" ;D <3
"It's easy to fail, hard to succeed"

ya know you can go anomonoys so ppl dont know its you xD or ya ppeople know it is you :D anyways I read your work and I loved it.. So much feeling good job :D im influencing on you with my poetry <3

on May. 20 2011 at 9:52 am
HunnyBun BRONZE, Johnston, Rhode Island
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good. i hope mine gets posted =/ i'm nervous about it going up. i've never posted my work up for other people to see =/

on May. 20 2011 at 9:51 am
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment </3"
"When the going gets tough, knock someone out" ;D <3
"It's easy to fail, hard to succeed"

heheehee thanks chaie <3 glad you like it there is more where that came from :D

on May. 20 2011 at 9:50 am
HunnyBun BRONZE, Johnston, Rhode Island
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good job haley :) luv u lol <3


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