Butterfly MAG

January 14, 2008
By Lauren Amoros SILVER, York, Pennsylvania
Lauren Amoros SILVER, York, Pennsylvania
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She
flutters into a bud,
dew-blessed petals mingle
with her breath
flower fingertips struggle to ensnare
this color-dusted beauty,
but her flight
makes this as simple as explaining
love.



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on Sep. 4 2014 at 10:39 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Now reading this over, I see misplled some words. I apologize! Thank you again!

on Sep. 4 2014 at 10:35 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is aboslutely beautiful. It's also very descritpive. It is like music, because yo wove your words smooothly. All in all, all I acn is that it's beautiful and has emotion and you in it. Congrats on having this published! You deserve it. Thank you for sharing this!

Mandy22 GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 7:20 am
Mandy22 GOLD, Apollo, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"True love will triumph in the end - which may or may not be a lie, but if it is a lie, then it's the most beautiful lie we have."

I loved this poem so much! Great job!

aeppard GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 10:12 am
aeppard GOLD, Essex, Connecticut
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I really like this. so good!

on Apr. 17 2011 at 4:46 pm
KaitlynMarie GOLD, Northborough, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I finally understood what true love meant...love meant that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be."
-Nicholas Sparks

I thought it was wonderful :)

on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:40 pm
perpetuallydancing GOLD, Prairie Village, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't have any shadows, you're not standing in the light."
- Lady Gaga

beautiful. nothing else to say.

on Jan. 10 2010 at 5:41 pm
the_Horsegirl SILVER, Minneapolis, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
People need dreams, there's as much nourishment in 'em as food.
--Dorothy Gilman

If there is such a thing as truth, it is as intricate and hidden as a crown of feathers.
--Isaac Bashevis Singer

Gorgeous. It sounds like music.

on Sep. 11 2009 at 8:44 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Beautiful. Love the wording. What more is there to say?

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 10:02 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Very nice work. Congratulations on being published. God bless, ...,

on Jul. 30 2009 at 1:28 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

oh wow. That is WONDERFUl!!

on Jul. 30 2009 at 12:59 am
marquieleelatham SILVER, Bangkok, Other
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't worry, be happy"

a beautiful poem.. magnifique!

keep writing!x

on Jul. 30 2009 at 12:58 am
marquieleelatham SILVER, Bangkok, Other
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't worry, be happy"

wow.. very short but very deep..

magnifique :)

on Jul. 29 2009 at 10:30 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Simple, deep,

on Jul. 29 2009 at 10:04 am
Pink_Butterfly, FC, Other
0 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never say there is nothing beautiful in the world anymore. There is always something to make wonder in the shape of a tree, the trembling of a leaf."
- Albert Schweitzer.

very nice, I thought it was beautiful ! :) Keep up the good work.


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