Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Butterfly This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


More by this author
She
flutters into a bud,
dew-blessed petals mingle
with her breath
flower fingertips struggle to ensnare
this color-dusted beauty,
but her flight
makes this as simple as explaining
love.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




Join the Discussion


This article has 14 comments. Post your own!

MissEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sep. 4 at 10:35 am:
This is aboslutely beautiful. It's also very descritpive. It is like music, because yo wove your words smooothly. All in all, all I acn is that it's beautiful and has emotion and you in it. Congrats on having this published! You deserve it. Thank you for sharing this!
 
MissEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sep. 4 at 10:39 am :
Now reading this over, I see misplled some words. I apologize! Thank you again!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Mandy22 said...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 7:20 am:
I loved this poem so much! Great job!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
runnergirl1 said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 10:12 am:
I really like this. so good!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
KaitlynCallahan said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 4:46 pm:
I thought it was wonderful :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
cretalakairaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:40 pm:
beautiful. nothing else to say.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
the_Horsegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 5:41 pm:
Gorgeous. It sounds like music.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Inkspired said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 8:44 pm:
Beautiful. Love the wording. What more is there to say?
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 10:02 pm:
Very nice work. Congratulations on being published. God bless, ...,
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 1:28 am:
oh wow. That is WONDERFUl!!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
literaturenymph said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 12:59 am:
a beautiful poem.. magnifique!
keep writing!x
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
literaturenymph said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 12:58 am:
wow.. very short but very deep..
magnifique :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 10:30 pm:
Simple, deep,
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Brittany=) said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 10:04 am:
very nice, I thought it was beautiful ! :) Keep up the good work.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback