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Cottages sit small and sweet
Atop hills of emerald green.
Each with a smoke stack brewing,
Melting away an afternoon mist.
Mysterious colors pierce dreary clouds
Sending promises of sunshine.
Carefully mounted before Sheephaven Bay,
The Castle of Doe overlooks
Yesterday’s future
And tomorrow’s past.
The Corncrake’s rare call muted
By waves barreling onto
Marble Hill’s sandy shores.



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bloodroselove said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 6:59 pm:
The imagery is absolutly stunning! it was like i was right there in such a beautifal land. awesome job on this poem i love it!
 
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Jul. 30, 2012 at 11:57 am :
Thank you for your feedback! It is very much appreciated! (=
 
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bloodroselove said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 6:58 pm:
Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!
 
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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 4:54 pm:
Awwww, this is beautiful! I love your language, and the imagery is stunning :D
 
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Feb. 25, 2012 at 10:07 pm :
Thanks! I really appreciate your review!
 
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stanza1 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 3:08 pm:
one of the best peoms i have ever read . nice work
 
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Jan. 24, 2012 at 4:04 pm :
Thank-you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
 
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