Dongeal Dreams

March 27, 2011
By WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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Cottages sit small and sweet
Atop hills of emerald green.
Each with a smoke stack brewing,
Melting away an afternoon mist.
Mysterious colors pierce dreary clouds
Sending promises of sunshine.
Carefully mounted before Sheephaven Bay,
The Castle of Doe overlooks
Yesterday’s future
And tomorrow’s past.
The Corncrake’s rare call muted
By waves barreling onto
Marble Hill’s sandy shores.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this piece because of my love for Ireland. It's about the County Donegal and I hope you like it!

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on Jul. 30 2012 at 11:57 am
WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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Thank you for your feedback! It is very much appreciated! (=

on Mar. 8 2012 at 6:59 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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The imagery is absolutly stunning! it was like i was right there in such a beautifal land. awesome job on this poem i love it!

on Mar. 8 2012 at 6:58 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!

on Feb. 25 2012 at 10:07 pm
WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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Thanks! I really appreciate your review!

on Feb. 2 2012 at 4:54 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Awwww, this is beautiful! I love your language, and the imagery is stunning :D

on Jan. 24 2012 at 4:04 pm
WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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Thank-you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

on Jan. 24 2012 at 3:08 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

one of the best peoms i have ever read . nice work


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