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Through Time

Seconds
Minutes
Hours
Days
Years
Hurrying
Hurrying
Hurrying to the next minute
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting for the next day
Rushing
Rushing
Rushing to the next year
Going
Going
Going to get to the end
To get where?





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HaleyDRog. said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 7:49 pm
This is my favorite! I love it!
 
XCLover said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 8:54 pm
i love it! great angle on the old 'take time to smell the roses' creative :D 
 
Beachgirl1 replied...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 9:17 pm
thank you so much! That means a lot!
 
KyotoLoveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 9:45 am

i agree with Dominicano_Loco.

This is really good cuz it could mean a lot of different things to different people.

depending on how you look at it..its deep, brutal truth. i see it as people never can slow down long enough to enjoy life. I love it(:

 
Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 2:32 pm
this would be a chorus for an excellent song. I could hear a beat as i read. Very nice. :)
 
Beachgirl1 replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 8:53 pm
thank you!
 
TheCreepyNeighbor said...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 3:28 pm
Wow I really like this. It was so fast paced, and well true. It had a great rythm.
 
Beachgirl1 replied...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 3:29 pm
thank you so much!
 
skaterchic said...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 9:24 am
SO TRUE! GOOD JOB!:D
 
Beachgirl1 replied...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 1:43 pm
thanks!!!!!!
 
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