Piano Song

March 9, 2011
By Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."


Tap of keys,
Drifting song,
Notes Dance.

Eyes alight,
Brain musing,
Body Unwind.

A,
Soft,
Melody,

A,
Humble,
Musician.

Air,
Bursts of sounds.

Music subsided,
Gone.


The author's comments:
Inspired by sister playing piano.

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on Apr. 17 2011 at 7:45 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

This is a great piece. I love playing piano and I love this poem.

XCLover GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:06 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

awesome, i love it!! this reminds me of my friend who plays piano in our jazz band and is so amazing! :D keep writing!

on Apr. 13 2011 at 10:11 am
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

really, :) thanks!

on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:50 am
ofpaintedroses GOLD, Berne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"How long is forever?"
"Sometimes just one second."

Music is a nice touch. I like the structure. and the whole thing.

you know that all your poems make me think of a song? I like it(:


JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:46 am
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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Awesome, I love the piano !(although I can't play really well) I still like it, and I love the imagery, its great.

on Apr. 11 2011 at 2:23 pm
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

the imagery is quite unique. I used to play piano a little bit, and this poem makes me wish to take up the keys again. Very good job. :)

on Apr. 11 2011 at 12:48 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

thank you!

on Apr. 10 2011 at 10:03 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:)) i like this a lot!! (:


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