Hospital Scene

March 8, 2011

Darkness surrounds me.
There's nobody here.
Is this real?
Or just a dream?

I turn,
but the view remains.
What am I doing here?
And If I'm not

Why would I dream up such a bizarre place
Then I hear something.
A calm beeping.

I heard a voice, too.
"Breathe" and mumbling.
That's weird.
Then a light.

Bright, but blurred.
And quite easy to follow.
Wait, thinking back...
"She can't breathe"

Then I was gone
And once again, I heard her forbidden voice

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I had this weird dream where I died, but everything that was happening in the hospital, I heard. I was basically 'There' for my own death. So I wrote this, to describe most of what happened.

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