what creature has two hearts?

March 6, 2011
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the rain wont stop falling
the lightning cant stop shaking my whole body from breaking.

my heart suddenly stops beating
and suddenly i noticed the stare youre giving me.

the look on your face made me cry
that look, i swear it could break a thousand hearts.

you broke me
you knew that.
you left me
you dont have to say it but i know you cant help it.

you broke us
i hope you knew that.
you left our chance
you stepped on it and threw it on my face.

what creature has two hearts?
cause you took mine with you.

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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 7:15 am

You can use apostrophes and you can still work with the flow. And regarding the last line, I think you should have used because instead of cause but it's okay anyway. :))


Same with your other poems, this one is good... Just a little work and it's great! :) Nyah!

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