March 10, 2011
Deepened from thy grief held me no tender price to pay

But cruelest glimps of darkness from the frailest lights of day

Hath thou returned my innocense my light be blessesed now!

Hath thou begrudge my modesty my temper blames me now!

Shall I be brought to my knees by boiled hunger for truth

Shall you revoke me from being yours as I revoke you

Dance in the regal base of drama for it whispers to your soul

When the curtain falls tomorrow, the end is never told

Catch the rage of happiness for it pierces you more so

Hold the grief of joy for it grips the coldest soul

Right is for the damned and the wrong is for the condemmed!

Have you ever known a sorrow so fruitiful as them

He who beckons my passion

And he who thou spoke to in haste

He who I let touch my flesh and my aroma he hath taste

I despise your truth for it wounds me so

A cold summer day turned the roses all to stone

Bitter breath of hatred maims the poisoned man

The poison wasn't held by the hatred

No it was held by the womans hand

Hath thou known the agony of the forgotten and the remembered to late

Wretched royals!

My vial meets your fate

Groom her in splendor and you spoil your life

Thou never known such beauty as the gentle touch of such silver knife

Thou shall never know

Rise the end of the day to it's entrance

As the lines of death be drawn

When yon ivory tower rises to it's glory

I shall sing my final song

When you pluck tears from my eyes they were never meant for you

Stolen by betrayal, they were meant for happiness too!

Tears of joy begone me as I doubt to be your choice

Hear the rise of the ending words, and the hollow dutiful voice

Eyes won't meet for I am blind

Oh monsieur! Lest my life be returned by a hatred towards me I say not to be so!

The curtain has risen!

The endings not known

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HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 2:36 pm
I like this...maybe it's not the greatest of the great, but it still has character and I like the way it flows.  Up with funky old words!  or phrases...
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 5:05 pm
I appreciate you honesty. Actually I appreciate anything you say, what ever anybody says, whether good or bad...it's just nice to know someone took the time out of their life to read something you wrote. It kind of humbles you when strangers give you the time of day. I'm so lucky to be able to post this on my computer and get critiqued, some people will never be heard. I am being heard, I love it. Thank you!
HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 7:08 pm
Hey wow, I'm happy that you didn't get upset or take that the wrong way.  I attempted to write a sonnet.  Haha.  I wrote an okay poem, but it was not the right meter or emphasis on the right syllables.  Could you check out some of my work?  I wish i had more comments.  Most of my poems don't have any.  You could start with Just Thinking.  Keep writing!
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 11:33 am
I think you have every right to your opinion. I'm glad you commented at all in the first place. I'd be happy to read your work. I promise to leave a comment. Hopefully I can get some good ratings for myself too :)
Aderes18 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 2:47 pm
The old English makes it fun to read. It makes it seem very beautiful and artistic but I really don't get your message. It's still cool though. :)
SeasofSorrow replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 4:50 pm
I find it is about a woman, wholly and completely lost to a world of lust and anger and revenge. I find that maybe she is mocking herself, mocking the man that betrayed her. Threatening him, threatning herself. She tells a story...and it is up to you to decide what the ending is, even she doesn't know it.
Aderes18 replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 5:29 pm
SeasofSorrow replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 6:15 pm
You have no idea how much these comments mean to me! Thank YOU for commenting! :)
Aderes18 replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 6:18 pm
You're welcome. Let me read more of ur writing. 
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