To All of The Above

March 10, 2011
To pretension and redemption

Suspended in a truth

To when loving anybody

Always first love you

To being one with heavy

To being one with light

To being periodically

Always, always right

To shoving against exhaustion

And losing sleep as well

To caring for your self

Though no one else can tell

To hold a grudge alone

And always striving greed

To always feeling empty

And only taking what you need

To being first in general

And losing last to lies

To showing great denial

And never failing to surprise

To silver winning gold

To copper being pure

To pennies facing tails

And heads facing to endure

To simple complex faults

And ridiculing crime

To losing for the one and only

Next to last time

To falling hard and flat

To being very thin

To being slant outside

And bold from within

To castles in the sky

And moments that never end

To losing what you love

And gaining your best friends

To holding hands

And loving looking back

To want to see the damsel in distress

Be rescued from the tracks

To showing off

And being smart

To knowing honesty

Is a lost art

To never giving up

To always stopping now

To lose but not forget

A womans only vow

To shooting for the stars

And falling on the sun

To knowing getting burned

Is always half the fun

To spirals down the sink

When it pours, you drown

To copying every smile

And noticing every frown

To living life at best

And always tempting fate

To hinting towards death

And your expiration date

To hollow empty dreams

And shinning dimming stars

To flailing at the weddings

And anonymous tips at bars

To soiling the air

With every breath you take

To feeling every moment

And hoping it's not to late

To knowing your alright

And not understanding love

But never hesitating on a yes

To all of the above

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Muzee3 said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 10:41 am
Keep it going... THis cant be your best... love it
tati_pax said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:48 pm
this is absolutely amazing...ilove t.. beautiful words.. honest..good flow.. its truly amazing.
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 5:08 pm
Thank you so much! It means so much to have people say things nice or not so nice about my writing. I guess I've felt sorely unappreciated when I've read aloud to people. It doesn't really interest them if they don't like writing in the first place. With this I am writing to people who appreciate ANY writing, and maybe my writing can make the cut for some peoples likes or dislikes. As long as I'm out there and getting heard, I'm quote thrilled with my current situation. :)
newsoulpoet replied...
May 28, 2011 at 3:50 pm
I know what you mean. All your work and effort seem to be that much more when others appreciate it and understand it, then respond. We all crave praise and acceptance from not only those we care about, but also people who we have never met. It just makes everthing better when others appreciate your work. Awesome poem!
Aderes18 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 6:20 pm
I love this poem!
SeasofSorrow replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 6:46 pm
Thanks! I've got a better one coming up that is pending approval from the editors. I give you major thanks for your support, and I'm very glad you like my writing. :)
hope95 replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 8:57 pm

i really like how this poem doesnt only show one problem one may face but to many more and how it makes you realize that its ok to have these problems and its ok to be part of these things. it was fun to read and i really enjoyed it. keep writing:)


jh6-4ever replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 6:58 am
3 minutes??? You have a gift.. This was honestly beautiful...
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 2:33 pm
Thanks so much, on the bright side I got an A+! On the other bright side I have you fantastic people commenting on everything I do. Ha-ha...a gift? Thank you so much you have no idea how much it means to me to hear that :)
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