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The old you

i miss you
no i miss who you were
not you cuz this you isn't you this
is something new not the one i knew
i miss the old you cuz now i dont know you
you became a stranger when you were my closest to me
now the farthest to me
i miss you



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Faey101 said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 3:20 pm:
This is a great short, meaningful poem. I like it!
 
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Meh. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 10:34 am:
I would love this better if it had punctuation and capitals.
 
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hope95 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 9:02 pm:

i like this. this is a short poem with great meaning. keep it up:)

 

 
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