Who is she?

February 27, 2011
By , Perry, OH
She has the big house
She has the nice cars
But no one sees the scars
Beautiful face
Amazing body
But has anyone seen her mommy
Long brown hair
Naturally tanned skin
But what about the place she is in
And her life goes by in such a blur
She is of course daddy’s little girl
But no one knows where she came from
Or that she doesn’t know who her brothers are
Jet skiing everyday in the summer
And vacations like no other
She can only sit and wonder
Who is this girl that I see
Am I the rich girl or a peasant to be
I don’t know who I am
And this broken heart is getting harder to mend
She fights the pain
But the tears fall all the same
Yes this is all true
I would never lie to you
This is my life and I try to live it
But how can I’m barely in it
Who is this girl I see
I guess….it’s me….





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PianoRain said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 8:48 pm
This is very well done; the contrast works well, but the best part for me was at the end, where you switched between first person and second person. :) 5 stars!
 
deadea22 replied...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 12:19 pm
thank you so much!
 
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