Sour! Sweet! Gone!

March 3, 2011
By lsuds1616 BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
lsuds1616 BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Love is a sour patch kid
Breaking your heart, shattering into pieces
Sour…pungent, no taste
Realizing what’s been lost
He wants me back, turns sweet…affectionate, sympathetic just like any boy should be
Problem is I don’t like sour patch kids, I spit him out in the trash, where he belongs
Love is a sour patch kid

Sour! Sweet! Gone!


The author's comments:
I hope people will understand the concept behind this poem and understand it's a extended metaphor.

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on Mar. 31 2011 at 8:33 am
DaBritt3 BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to write for yourself and have no public than to write for the public and have no self." - Cyril Connolly

Yay! This turned out great..Sour. Sweet. Gone!


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