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Take A Bow

March 7, 2011
By DanniTwin502 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything Happens for a reason."
"The only thing I know, is I don't know anything."
"Would you rather me be honest, or lie?"

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You’re all I’m thinkin about now
So take a bow
You have to have everyone be in love with you
And then I do…fall in love with you
So take a bow for breakin me
You finally conquered the grand defeat
You a heartbreaker
The grand faker, always gonna be the player
Don’t know why I fell for you
Probably the dumbest thing I’ll ever do
Especially since there’s no future to be
So take a bow, just for me.

© Kailey E., Crownsville, MD

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"If you're going to fall in love, at least find someone worth loving."
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DanniTwin502 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 2:55 pm
DanniTwin502 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything Happens for a reason."
"The only thing I know, is I don't know anything."
"Would you rather me be honest, or lie?"

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Thank you for the feedback, and honestly I didn't mean for there to be sarcasm it was just how I felt, more of a tired and sad poem to me but that's the great thing about poetry, you can see it in many ways<3
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 11:05 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
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"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

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"So take a bow, just for me", I don't know why, but that struck me as particularily poignant, there's almost a more than a hint of sarcasm to the whole poem.