Take A Bow

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You’re all I’m thinkin about now
So take a bow
You have to have everyone be in love with you
And then I do…fall in love with you
So take a bow for breakin me
You finally conquered the grand defeat
You a heartbreaker
The grand faker, always gonna be the player
Don’t know why I fell for you
Probably the dumbest thing I’ll ever do
Especially since there’s no future to be
So take a bow, just for me.





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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 11:05 am
"So take a bow, just for me", I don't know why, but that struck me as particularily poignant, there's almost a more than a hint of sarcasm to the whole poem.
 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 2:55 pm
Thank you for the feedback, and honestly I didn't mean for there to be sarcasm it was just how I felt, more of a tired and sad poem to me but that's the great thing about poetry, you can see it in many ways<3
 
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