Good Girls Drown

March 2, 2011
By dancingintheflames GOLD, Kirksville, Missouri
dancingintheflames GOLD, Kirksville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
She stood in the storm and when the wind didn't blow her away, she adjusted her sails<3

Life whirls around,
Trouble passes by,
Perfect on the outside,
The waves of emotion,
Ups and downs of life,
All where it can be ruined,
In the oceans where good girls die,
Mother's perfect daughter,
Straight A's and all in line,
Daddies little girl,
Sports can move my world,
While secretly I sing,
To the oceans where good girls drown,
I resist them daily,
But can't help but wonder,
When, oh when my sweet ocean,
Will finally pull me in,
Into the oceans where the good girls drown,
Will I stand strong,
Resist it's tedious song,
For there's a thin line,
Between the light side,
And the dark side,
Of where the oceans that drown good girls lay,
You may get close,
Or fall away,
Loose your balance on the tight-rope of today,
And slip beneath the surface of,
The oceans where good girls waste away.

The author's comments:
Life and its temptations.....

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on Dec. 1 2011 at 1:40 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

This is awesome! You really described alot in this, and very descriptively. GREAT job! :) I enjoyed this very much.


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