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My Dyeing Love for You

This is my heart please keep it safe
In a special spot with some empty space
You’re my love always and for ever
I think about you day and night
And my heart is sad when you’re not by my side
This is for you; you truly are my true love



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Muzee3 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:27 am
U cant both get together... u've got the talent!! LOL
 
POET_MAN16 replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 3:42 am
lol i kno i do but i want the girl to
 
Muzee3 replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 5:45 am
Hey am so sorry.... I had bymstakly added 'T' to can... LOL..... Don't worry.... BTW, can u comment/rate on mine too?
 
Sabee replied...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 3:10 am
shocked really shocked
 
POET_MAN16 replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 12:44 am
y r u shoked
 
Sabee replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 2:01 am
Because i feel it that way and when i read it i was shocked
 
Muzee3 replied...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 3:18 am
things lyk tht happen. anywy calm down now. :P
 
Brokenness_is_Beautiful said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:27 pm
Awww...I'm almost to tears!!! I might just have to marry you! jk...anyways have you tried giving her one of your poems? they are really great!
 
POET_MAN16 replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:55 am
yes i already gave her one and it worked :) poeams are just amazing beautiful pices of art that i love
 
POET_MAN16 said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 7:59 am
plz comment
 
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