Sand and Snow

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Limitless colors float by and flow,
tranquilizing hearts of hurt and woe.
I retreat to the terrific realm of my dreams
As I bask in my world of sand and snow.





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I<3violin said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 5:33 pm
Oh cool :) I was just asking cause at first it felt wierd that dreams was the only one that didn't rhyme. I actually kinda like that though cause it sort-of makes that line seem more climatic. I don't know... Beautiful poem :D
 
I<3violin said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 4:22 pm
Cool! Interesting format. Is there a name for that or did you make it up? 
 
akell This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 4:50 pm
It... just felt right. :)
 
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