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I'm at the edge.
this is a dangerous ledge.
I only wish you could have taken this pledge.
except my heart.
remember? like you promised from the start,
but instead you aren't taking part.
now I have a broken heart.
I'm trying to find a reason why you didn't love me too.
I guess I will never be good enough for you.
now you have me at the edge of my mind
just trying to find some reason why you didn't love me too.
my tears fall down now,
and no I'm not to blame, its you.




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johnmayerlvr said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:58 pm:

Thank you..

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Monkee63 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 9:50 am:
I love this poem so much! It is so fulll of emotion and I love the rhyming...It is really a great poem!
 
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HisPurePrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 1:17 pm:
I like this...where' the like button on here, huh?
 
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laaaurenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 12:31 pm:
so beautiful
 
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