February 27, 2011
You go to school and act like every things cool
When you get home you fall apart
Into the pain and suffering
Into the black hole
Where nothing can help you
You refused to be helped
What’s the point now?
You asked yourself
Why try?
But you know you just want things to be right
The way they’re supposed to be:
No fights, no getting abused
Just a nice place, it’s not coming to you
You have to find it

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HaleyDRog. said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 11:46 pm
This was a very impressive piece. It is relatable, which makes it that much greater!
loser_like_me_xP said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 10:21 pm
:)))) impressiveeee (: Great job!! this is awesome
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 8:16 pm
OOOH!!!  I love this!!!!!  I love it how he's acting to be all mellow and stuff and then everything falls apart.  And the part where he has to find it...GENIOUS!!!!!
Carlos-Concussion replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 7:11 am
Thanks very much!!
Basketball23 replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 2:14 pm
You're welcome!!!!!! :))
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