Life.

February 27, 2011
By Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother


You go to school and act like every things cool
When you get home you fall apart
Into the pain and suffering
Into the black hole
Where nothing can help you
You refused to be helped
What’s the point now?
You asked yourself
Why try?
But you know you just want things to be right
The way they’re supposed to be:
No fights, no getting abused
Just a nice place, it’s not coming to you
You have to find it



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on Apr. 23 2011 at 11:46 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

This was a very impressive piece. It is relatable, which makes it that much greater!

on Mar. 22 2011 at 2:14 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

You're welcome!!!!!! :))

on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:11 am
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
51 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

Thanks very much!!

on Mar. 21 2011 at 10:21 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:)))) impressiveeee (: Great job!! this is awesome

on Mar. 21 2011 at 8:16 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

OOOH!!!  I love this!!!!!  I love it how he's acting to be all mellow and stuff and then everything falls apart.  And the part where he has to find it...GENIOUS!!!!!


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