February 15, 2011
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I am laying in the dark
My dreams are hovering like a shark
Waiting until I drift into the dark
Sleep washes over my eyes
It's the one thing I despise
There is so much to know
How will I discover if I am in the dark
I finally let my dreams attack
Now I know the knowledge I used to lack

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Monkee63 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 10:08 am
I really like this. Its good for a beginner. You have a great piece here. The rhyming is great...and I really love the flow of the words and how it all just flows together!
nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:32 pm
Good for a beginner, you have potential so keep writing. :)
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