Buried Alive

February 15, 2011
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Bye, Bye
Wonderful sunshine
I love your warmth
I love your shine
Bye, Bye
My wonderful sunshine
I’m going under
I do not want too
But have no choice
I must leave
Without your voice
Goodbye wind
Goodbye sun
Goodbye my life
As I will die

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skysurferfan said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 10:40 pm
I love the language you choose.  The repetiveness, as well as the almost childlike use of "Bye bye" make this a quite good poem.  However, I get the feeling that I'm missing something, like there's more to it, like a backstory.
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