Too Young

February 22, 2011
By AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”


You are missed greatly,
you left us in a rush.

I still can't believe you're gone.
you were just too young.

Even with only a few memories we shared,
we still had a bond,a strong family love.

You were always their,brightening up every ones day with your warm,loving smile.

Towards the end,you were a mess,never talking or laughing
A pittie too see.

It was hard to sleep at night knowing rite above me you were drinkingg,

wasting your life.

You were a great sole,
God wanted you ,
One of his angles back home with him.

Everyone misses you,
Every time I think of the clock,
I look up and think....


you were just too young.

-November 19,2009 R.I.P
Forever loved and Missed-


The author's comments:
This is too a loved family member who passed away.I wrote this,printed it and framed it and put it up at his grave.I will soon have pics. of that.The clock is referring too the grandfather clock he always fixed when he came over.

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on Jul. 18 2011 at 9:49 am
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thanks everyone! And im sorry for your loss (for you and your mother)

 


on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:20 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

I loved this one. The ones from the heart are always the best! I loved how you took this to his grave. He must have been something else. Death is always relatable, it makes your poem so much better. My mom just recently had 3 deaths in one week, Imagine that. They were close to her, not really to me but its still sad.

on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:36 pm
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou

I see a few grammatical errors, but other than that you portrayed your emotions well throughout this poem. My respects to your family member.

on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:51 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

There are a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. Be sure to use spaces after commas in the future. Other than that, I like the emotion you put into this.

on Jul. 13 2011 at 5:56 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thanks! And yeah, I know I really need too work on my spelling. haha.. But  I did summit more work, just the other day and it wasnt apprpved yet! but thanks so much!!!!

 


on Jul. 13 2011 at 12:23 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I like this a lot. Your style is interesting, and I'd love to see more of your work. My only problem would be the few spelling mistakes, like 'their' should be 'there', and 'pittie' should be 'pity'. Other than that, this is a great piece. Keep writing!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 4:14 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

POSTING THE PICS. TONITE!<3


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