A Lovely Sight This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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When I close my eyes
I see better, deeper
My eyes can only stay closed
For so long, until a force
Of attraction, you, perhaps
Jolts them open, and what can I do
But lose all control and stare
Like looking upon the moon
for the first time
How funny is it then
That when I start to see
I am blinded by your sheer beauty?
If only I could see the future
But I can't
For it'd require me
To close my eyes
And see again.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Brie555 said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 8:56 pm
DUDE! AMAZING POEM!! :DD u gotta keep wrighting! this is marvoulusly beutiful <3
 
barnhaidm said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 11:40 am
I love this poem :) Keep writing
 
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